Editing bulleted content for a PowerPoint presentation

This sample shows HealthEdit's revision of a PowerPoint slide for nursing and other health professionals. The slide was delivered by a clinical expert as shown below. HealthEdit revised the slide to make the language consistent and more appropriate for a slide show. We also broke the content into two slides to enhance viewing and reorganized the content for more seamless transitions from point to point. (Please note that the design of the "After" slide is a standard one for the client and not one of HealthEdit's.)

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AFTER

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